I love the concept of the game, but I have a point of critique on the layout:
You should move the text away from the edge of the page, it ends up looking very cramped and makes it somewhat unpleasant to read.
This is in the Print version of the document, so I feel like I could safely assume the intention is that when printed, there will be a border between the edge of the page and the text, but you have so much room on the other side, that I would move it over regardless.
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I love the concept of the game, but I have a point of critique on the layout:
You should move the text away from the edge of the page, it ends up looking very cramped and makes it somewhat unpleasant to read.
This is in the Print version of the document, so I feel like I could safely assume the intention is that when printed, there will be a border between the edge of the page and the text, but you have so much room on the other side, that I would move it over regardless.
Was very fun to play test, looking forward to others being able to enjoy it too :)